Tuesday, November 27, 2007

A Walk Together



So, here's a complementary poem......
to what??

keep reading..



I am for adding adding a poem from my friends side ........................He wrote a poem and i couldnt resist putting it up here.





Just adding the flip side(other person's) view to the "Can we walk together" poem already put...................
Rest of the meaning is for you to find out :D









we started a walk
a walk together....
i could see clouds,heavens riding me......
elated..forgot the thrns of life....
hurt bt assured of tat soothing hand...





m bleeding...but cant find sumone...
a sound apart says m with u!!! move on!!!
i giv a thought bt m happy...moving on..





galores!!! m so happy....
i cld remember only her face...
jst want to hld her tight..
we bth shld be elated..





a sound apart....m happy ...move on!!!
m happy!!! i need to be!!! she's my love...
.i move on.........!!!





1m looking for her!!!n here she comes..
i tell her!!we walk together!????
she laughs...m thre always..
y r u so stupid!!!!





i feel stupid!!! n i move on...
i can see her njoying , laughing...
m happy for her.....
she is in pain....i wish
i cld takeit all on me...
xpecting her to look at me!!!....





i move on!!! walking together....
together wit a void.....
bt walking together....




-prashant(greymater)

4 comments:

greymater said...

well awesome, brilliant, jst shrt of words.....tat deserves a booker nomination!!! :D
hi hi..jokes apart,,,,, thanx fr putting tat on the blog... :D
n keep writing..njoyyyy!!!!

Shreya said...

Ye sahi hai khud likho n khud enjoy the comments... :P
maine poem put kiya matlab hi compliment tha ki ur poem is very nice :)

cant say more :D

good work greymater :)
take care
shreya

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