Can we Walk together?
I wont ask you to be with me forever
but can we walk together today?
Forever is a matter of fate
something that is not withing my reach
what's with me today and now is You.
I wish to be with you
just this moment and now
can we walk together?
Am i so much a stranger to you?
or is it that you cannot face me now?
Did i hurt you?
or ARE you afraid that you will hurt me?
Love is too strange
and you can see what it has done to me.
We stand in here together dressed in pain
some part within me hurts me bad
so do i know something hurts you back.
We cant go back to where we begun from
but we can still walk ahead
can we walk together?
Stretch out your hand to me
I would always be here for you my love
I promise you would find me right here
can we walk together?
Hold my hand and close your Eyes
Let the pain of world slip away
Hold me on and hold me tight
I promise to hold your hand old and young
I promise i would never break free of the bond we share.
Walk ahead and Face the world
I will always be by your side
For you arent walking alone
Neither am i..
Neither am i..
so Let me know
can we walk together??
7 comments:
HUMM MAST HAI I THINK FIRST POEM IN BLOG SUPERB LIKHEE HAI .......
GUD PIECE OF IMAGINATION :-)..... SAHE HAI AISE HE LIKHTE RAHNA POEM :-)
TO KOI MILLA SATH CHALNE WAALA??? HEHEHEHE
Hey thanx atleast i could write this :)
and as long as imagination is beautiful whats wrong imagining huh!!
Honestly I wrote what i felt.
and ab agar mil gaya hota to samne wale se puchti kya "Can we walk??"
See the ques is still left at the end of the poem unanswered ....
So its still question mark :)
Btw thanx for reading and appreciating
adios
take care
shreya
Hey Shreya!...
frankly speaking,wen i first read it i was out of words..
ur poem reflects ur crystal clear views n feelings..
so keep writing!..
n i wish that u get the one who walks wid u today,tomorrow n always..
love you hamesha,
-purvi
I can only add this to your comment ...
I wish the ques i wrapped in the poem gets answered :)
Thank You dear and i wish that your wish for me comes TRUE ;)
take care
well bht accha likha hai
...gud thought...
reading dis...i hav also written something.....
we started a walk
a walk together....
i could see clouds,heavens riding me......
elated..forgot the thrns of life....
hurt bt assured of tat soothing hand...
m bleeding...but cant find sumone...
a sound apart says m with u!!! move on!!!
i giv a thought bt m happy...moving on..
galores!!! m so happy....
i cld remember only her face...
jst want to hld her tight..
we bth shld be elated..
a sound apart....m happy ...move on!!!
m happy!!! i need to be!!! she's my love....
i move on.........!!!1
m looking for her!!!n here she comes..
i tell her!!we walk together!????
she laughs...m thre always..
y r u so stupid!!!!
i feel stupid!!! n i move on...
i can see her njoying , laughing....
m happy for her.....
she is in pain....i wish
i cld takeit all on me...
xpecting her to look at me!!!....
i move on!!! walking together....
together wit a void.....
bt walking together....
-prashant
Honestly i do wish she looks at you a nice view point frm the Other side.........who kws whats the other way round the table :D
....nothing more to say.....
anywz thanx for commenting u wrote a nice poem n i wish to put it up in my blog
wid due regards to you :D
thx agn
take care
shreya :)
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